Sunday, 7 April 2013

Q7 - Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?

Q7 - Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?


(MASTHEAD)


Old work (TOP) to new work (BOTTOM)  - FRONT COVER'S





Here are two of my magazines Front cover - MASTHEAD'S which I have produced, as you can see at the top which is called 'INDEPENDENCE' was my Pri-Lim task. Underneath the Pri-Lim Task is my recent Music Magazine called ' RHYME'. Here you are able to see the development and how much better it looks from the first task to the Music Magazine task. Looking at the presentation of the Masthead on the Pri-Lim Task the font is much more simple and plain than the Music Magazine Masthead. The new task 'RHYME' was much more bolder and it looks as if it took more time and had more thought about. Both Masthead's are at the top hand side - centre. I wanted to keep the Masthead the same position as I think it allows the readers/viewers notice it, both are placed on top of the image - on top of the hair slightly placed not covering most of the hair. For both Mastheads I used capital letter as it has a greater impact on the look of the page. For the 'RHYME' Masthead I added a slight drop shadow using Photoshop to add a 3D effect to the Masthead as I didn't want to add more impact to the Masthead to over power it's look.
 
 


Old work (TOP) to new work (BOTTOM)  - CONTENT'S PAGE'S
 

 
At the top as you can see in order from the Pri-Lim Task then after at the bottom is the recent task - My Music Magazine. You can see the difference between the old and new task's, before I wasn't confident with the program Photoshop. After having a go with producing the Masthead for the Pri-Lim Task I got used to the program having an tour around the different tools such as editing - drop shadow, inner shadow etc. The position of the Pri-Lim Task Masthead is shown on the left hand side, for my Music Magazine Task I wanted to place the word 'CONTENTS' near to the right hand side at the top while I included two images of two male individuals to make the top half look more attractive and different. I kept the scheme the same through out the Front Cover to the Content's Page the same using similar colour to blend well together. 
 
 
 
(FRONT COVER IMAGE)
 

 
On the left hand side was the Pri-Lim Task and on the right hand side is the Music Task.
 
The difference between the two image is that one has a book in their hand but the Music task hasn't got any props in the image. The left image has a nature view background but the right image has a plain background, I wanted to attention to focus onto the artist not over crowed with other props etc. Both imaged have eye contact with the viewers which to me is very important because it draws attentions between the image and the readers. It's as if the artist is convincing the readers/viewers to buy the magazine, but if I had to choose out of both magazines shown above, I would choose the right side magazine from the detail the artist is wearing; from the make-up to the watch and then the clothing she is wearing is well planned and thought of then the left hand side image.
 
 The facial expressions are different from each other as the right image shows serious but sophistication look to her, looking glamorous and all done up to attract the male readers as well as being a role model to be look up to by the young female ladies. 

(CONTENTS IMAGE) - Pri-Lim Task
 










(CONTENTS IMAGE) - Music Magazine

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
(DPS IMAGE) - Music Magazine
 
 
 
 
 
 
LAYOUT OF THE (Front Cover) on the LEFT is the Pri-Lim Task, on the RIGHT is the Music Task
 

 
 

LAYOUT OF THE (Contents Page) on the LEFT is the Pri-Lim Task, on the RIGHT is the Music Task
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
LAYOUT OF THE (DPS)
 
 
 
 
 
 
FONT USE OF THE (Front Cover, Contents Page & DPS)
 
 

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

TEXT OF THE (Front Cover) on the LEFT is the Pri-Lim Task, on the RIGHT is the Music Task
 











TEXT OF THE (Contents Page) on the LEFT is the Pri-Lim Task, on the RIGHT is the Music Task
 
 

 

1 comment:

  1. I'm on the fence about this, while more customization is good, I have a feeling this is a "in-progress" update, it just feels incomplete and half-way there.
    We use badge layout for apps on design approvals (visual projects), so the image being displayed is important. Old layout "feels like" it had larger images,
    maybe because the images were cropped more loosely so it's easier to tell which project it was at quick glance. Now the image is cropped closer, making it
    harder to scan thru at quick glance. I find myself needing to click into the project more often than usual. Which makes the whole user experience less
    efficient.
    I have a couple suggestions that might make it work better:
    1. Increase the height of the window the cover image is being displayed.
    2. Let us to choose which image to be displayed as "cover" (like how Pinterest handles cover images of each board, was hoping for this for a long time)
    3. Let us adjust which part of the image to show and how tight or loose the crop is (with a fixed window, let us move the image around and maybe enlarge or
    shrink it to control what shows thru the window. Pinterest does a limited form of this, which is very useful in making the cover image relevant)
    4. Allow Cover Image to be ordered in different hierarchy (currently every element can be ordered differently except the Cover Image, it seems to be stuck
    in the 2nd spot, would like the option to set it on another spot in the layout. This one seems like an easy fix, since you guys allow that for every other
    element already)

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