FEEDBACK FROM MY TEACHERS ON MY CONTENTS PAGE

FEEDBACK FROM MY TEACHERS ON MY DPS

Before handing in my final DPS, I had tried different layouts of my DPS. Once I thought it looked good enough to hand in as a near enough final piece, I handed it into my teachers to mark and help me with what improvements I can change to develop my DPS to become more of a good standard.

 

Here are some of my teachers notes written on a print out of my DPS, pictures zoomed in to show what was written.

 This notes from my teacher helped me develop my DPS to become more attractive. I found it very helpful and gave me another chance to show my ability in working with Photoshop.

My Final FRONT COVER

My Final CONTENTS PAGE

My Final DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

Evaluations Q1 - TITLE's

This was one of a few titles which became my music magazines name 'RHYME'.

 

 

 

 

This was my final choice of the font which i tried to match the font style near enough to the font that i used on my front cover.

 

 

 

 

This screen shot of 'MAKE IT REAL' was a slogan/heading which was based on the 'double page spread'. I had looked all over different websites over the internet and i came across a website called 'Dafont'. This website allowed me to type in what i wanted to feature on my pages, and i have the choices from diffrernt styles to pick one and to edit the text to blend into my page to look like a perfect fit.

 

 

 

The screen shot which is shown above the text shows the change/developement from how it looked to where it looked after i had made sure i sticked to my colour scheme; RED, GOLD/BROWN, BLACK AND WHITE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Contents Page - FINAL LOOK